Saturday, June 16, 2012

Guest Story Editing Part 5

        As the day went on, Fluffy longed for another piece of delicious saltwater taffy. For the next week or so, Fluffy went over to Wiggles' house everyday; everyday that he went, he would take another piece of taffy from the mantle.

        Fluffy craved saltwater taffy progressively more as the sun descended.  She left at dusk and went immediately to bed, dreaming of the candy.  For the next few days, Fluffy returned to Wiggles' house and ate a piece of his taffy on each visit.  She denied her subconscious claims of addiction.

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