(Edit: I've gotten all of the feedback I need at this stage of the game [tight deadline]. Thanks for dropping in.)
In my Writing for Digital Media class, I'm in a group of three for a collaborative project, and the project requires collaboration both within the group and outside. If you have a few minutes to spare and some creative energy flowing, please consider watching this video and commenting below advice for possible chorus lines or suggestions for lyrics or any other aspect of the song we are making. Thanks!