I liked it. It's haunting and horrible at the same time. Good use of that picture. When you commented on my blog, I didn't realize you had entered the Flash Friday, as well. Mine's here: http://flashfriday.wordpress.com/2014/09/26/flash-friday-vol-2-42/#comment-16351
Thank you. I liked yours as well. Nice use of science fiction tropes without abusing the tropes.