“Dip your dress in the water,” said
Maratha. “I think I can fix it.”
Lucy crawled to the water’s edge and
dunked the end of her dress into the creek.
The hole disappeared! “My dress!”
Lucy yelled. New, shimmering fabric lay
where the hole had been.
“I made you a patch from the water,”
said Maratha smiling.
Lucy stared down at her dress, eyes
wide. “How did you do it?”
Maratha looked puzzled. “I weaved it from the water.”
“That’s amazing. Thank you, Maratha.” Lucy brushed her hands across the seamless
patch and stood. “I’m ready to finish
our adventure.”
Maratha beamed. “We aren’t too far now.”
From there on the creek dipped and twisted
constantly down the grassy hill. Minnows
swam more often in this stretch of water.
Lucy continued at a brisk walk. Her breathing was back to normal. She couldn’t stop playing with her dress as
she trudged on.
The ground went perfectly flat for a
few paces before curving upward.
Maratha did a few spirals in the
water. “We’re here!” she cheered.
The surface of the water was darker
than usual. Along the bank, the pebbles
that should have been red or brown were mostly multi-colored. It was like seeing a hundred tiny rainbows.
Maratha’s smile began to droop. “Something’s wrong here,” she said.
“What is it?” asked Lucy.
“The water,” said Maratha. “It’s filthy.”
“It does look funny,” said Lucy.
“And it feels funny,” said Maratha.
Lucy picked up one of the rainbow
pebbles and rubbed her thumb across it.
It felt slippery. “Why don’t we
go downstream a bit more?” she suggested.
“I think that’s a good idea,” said
Maratha. She led the way.
Before long, the surface of the water
changed to black.
Maratha’s face turned white. “Oh, no.”
“The water,” said Lucy. “It’s really muddy.”
Maratha shook her head. “Not muddy, oily.”
“An oil spill! In the country?” Lucy said, gasping.
It looked like Maratha was crying, but
the water hid any tears. “I have to go
back and tell my father. This is
horrible.”
I'm loving this little story, but the poor river and poor Maratha!
ReplyDeleteThanks. The story needed an intense (relatively speaking) conflict in order to work. The emotional response is important.
DeleteThat's cool to be able to weave from water!
ReplyDeleteI thought so. Thanks for stopping by.
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