(Note: It's best that you at least glance at my A to Z Plan before reading unless you want to go into this story completely cold. Also, if you happen to be British, please tell me all the things I inevitably got wrong in this story, as far as word choice goes.)
June 24, 2056
There weren’t supposed
to be children on the moon. Beatrice and
Arran had been told this several times before they boarded the shuttle to the
Drake Lunar Base, both by UKSA and NASA.
But Beatrice couldn’t help it.
She had given up on conceiving months before she and her husband had
been selected to participate in this venture with the Americans. Nonetheless, thirty-nine weeks after landing
at the Base, Beatrice delivered the first baby born outside of Earth’s
atmosphere.
Luna woke up wailing on
the morning the aliens came. She had
just been fully weaned, so Beatrice cradled her in her arms and rocked her back
to sleep. Luna’s kip lasted perhaps
twenty minutes before the sound of heavy footsteps outside of her door had her
crying again.
Arran didn’t even stir in
his sleep beside Beatrice. She set Luna
down beside him and opened the door to have a butchers, dressed only in her
nightie.
“What is going on?” she
asked Jarod, one of the Base’s septics, as he hustled by.
“Not sure, going to see.”
Beatrice ran after him, navigating
the halls as best she could. It wasn’t
often that she was beyond the life sciences laboratory on the airlock’s side of
the Base.
Jarod stopped dead in
his tracks in front of her. He looked up
at the head of a giant, snake-like beast.
It must have been thirty meters long.
The beast unhinged its
jaw and said, “hello,” sounding as if it were gargling marbles.
While Jarod continued
staring at the beast in silence, Beatrice spun around and broke into a
footballer’s pace to cradle her baby, expecting it to be her final chance to do
so.
I hope Beatrice can run fast!
ReplyDeleteI hope so too!
DeleteMy heart started racing! That's how you know that you're reading something good- you feel it.
ReplyDeleteThose are my feelings as well. Great fiction makes you feel. Thrill, fear, ecstasy, anger, something.
DeleteYou've build up the atmosphere pretty good so far. All the best for future!
ReplyDeleteThank you! And all the best to you as you continue with The Challenge!
Deleteinteresting
ReplyDeleteI'm glad I piqued your interest.
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