Darkness swallowed the horizon
in one ravenous gulp. Swathes of
firmament submitted to the torrent of premature night.
Mathos shivered. His heart was a lump of ice. Bile rose in his throat, sludgy as the
blackness above.
“Mathos,” cried Elle. “You see that?” Her voice quavered.
A staff appeared in Mathos’
fist. His eyes burned. “Yes, my wife. This time I must vanquish the Dark One once
and for all.”
Elle leapt at him, a silent
scream on her lips. Her fingers sunk in
a pool of light.
Mathos soared, bearing the
shape of a dove, and entered the darkness.
Wow...awesome :D Very powerful.
ReplyDeleteSarah Allen
(Writing Blog)
Thank you. There are a lot of limitations to the drabble form (this story is exactly 100-words), but I love how much power you can hold when you trim everything else away.
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