tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1918357506534714894.post2672612690337576806..comments2024-03-28T05:25:17.791-04:00Comments on Into The Ravenous Maw: Lucy and the Water Sprite (Part 2 of 3)Patrick Stahlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09690555802232025818noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1918357506534714894.post-5147902290677366572013-09-17T17:35:03.135-04:002013-09-17T17:35:03.135-04:00I thought so. Thanks for stopping by.I thought so. Thanks for stopping by.Patrick Stahlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09690555802232025818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1918357506534714894.post-60796917429686620562013-09-17T08:10:36.174-04:002013-09-17T08:10:36.174-04:00That's cool to be able to weave from water!That's cool to be able to weave from water!kjmckendryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07534751311630921447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1918357506534714894.post-17873799889552789762013-09-17T06:26:13.208-04:002013-09-17T06:26:13.208-04:00Thanks. The story needed an intense (relatively s...Thanks. The story needed an intense (relatively speaking) conflict in order to work. The emotional response is important.Patrick Stahlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09690555802232025818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1918357506534714894.post-48007362477829848302013-09-17T04:24:40.522-04:002013-09-17T04:24:40.522-04:00I'm loving this little story, but the poor riv...I'm loving this little story, but the poor river and poor Maratha! Bonnee Crawfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01513268628209169538noreply@blogger.com