tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1918357506534714894.post8785697193792355061..comments2024-03-28T05:25:17.791-04:00Comments on Into The Ravenous Maw: A is for AbednegoPatrick Stahlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09690555802232025818noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1918357506534714894.post-83843364197503832462015-04-06T22:27:23.842-04:002015-04-06T22:27:23.842-04:00Thank you!Thank you!Patrick Stahlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09690555802232025818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1918357506534714894.post-73518884506896405582015-04-06T01:08:44.649-04:002015-04-06T01:08:44.649-04:00great opening great opening i b arorahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17161315866262492520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1918357506534714894.post-5406458364622272902015-04-02T22:09:26.457-04:002015-04-02T22:09:26.457-04:00Kyra probably won't be the only character to f...Kyra probably won't be the only character to faint in this story series, haha. It'll be a real challenge to do so without making those endings wooden, ending in the same bodily disruption.Patrick Stahlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09690555802232025818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1918357506534714894.post-25069573498780389402015-04-02T22:04:08.580-04:002015-04-02T22:04:08.580-04:00Yikes, black hairy worms! I think I'd faint to...Yikes, black hairy worms! I think I'd faint too, if they started "talking".kjmckendryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07534751311630921447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1918357506534714894.post-61310211597534744132015-04-02T20:41:53.911-04:002015-04-02T20:41:53.911-04:00Well thank you! I've been at this for quite a...Well thank you! I've been at this for quite a while. Interesting. Thanks for the follow! Happy A-Z ing to you as well!Patrick Stahlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09690555802232025818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1918357506534714894.post-32582427029975417642015-04-02T20:41:05.958-04:002015-04-02T20:41:05.958-04:00This post is going to be getting a sequel post lat...This post is going to be getting a sequel post later on in the Challenge, so you'll get to know. The beginning was just set-up for the character and an experiment for me in characterization, but thank you for the input. I'll try to cut to the action more quickly for my other posts.Patrick Stahlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09690555802232025818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1918357506534714894.post-36326501854816593792015-04-02T20:39:02.312-04:002015-04-02T20:39:02.312-04:00And I wouldn't have blamed you for it! Thanks...And I wouldn't have blamed you for it! Thanks for dropping in!Patrick Stahlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09690555802232025818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1918357506534714894.post-10823568122253254792015-04-02T20:37:13.134-04:002015-04-02T20:37:13.134-04:00I'm impressed that you're able to write th...I'm impressed that you're able to write that well, at only seventeen! You remind me a bit of my brother, actually! You just got yourself a new follower. Happy A-Z ing!Rachelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07507642753163503531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1918357506534714894.post-31716006680109912982015-04-02T19:12:53.887-04:002015-04-02T19:12:53.887-04:00I think you could have cut right to the point when...I think you could have cut right to the point when the worm things appeared and spent more of your word count on telling us what they wanted because now I want to know! ;) Stopping by from the A to Z trail. Sabrina A. Fishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14854713472424756485noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1918357506534714894.post-1599705006295255132015-04-02T16:56:15.613-04:002015-04-02T16:56:15.613-04:00I think I would have been like Kyra and fainted if...I think I would have been like Kyra and fainted if I encountered such an alien, even if they did come in peace!<br /><br />bettybettyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06323135450742337670noreply@blogger.com