tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1918357506534714894.post3906277353695503923..comments2024-03-28T05:25:17.791-04:00Comments on Into The Ravenous Maw: An Analysis of Five Lesser-Known First LinesPatrick Stahlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09690555802232025818noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1918357506534714894.post-45363790366351950222013-09-26T06:50:27.669-04:002013-09-26T06:50:27.669-04:00It was MG, so he could get away with it. I probabl...It was MG, so he could get away with it. I probably should have mentioned that. Standard epic fantasy prologue fare, but that's still not an excuse. You're welcome.Patrick Stahlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09690555802232025818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1918357506534714894.post-33978615849348111602013-09-26T03:00:11.398-04:002013-09-26T03:00:11.398-04:00First lines are always tricky. It's a matter o...First lines are always tricky. It's a matter of hooking the reader and introducing the story at the same time. Number 4 was a little too loaded for my taste, I think some of the stuff about the character could have been talked about later, even if it was later in the same paragraph. Thanks for sharing this post with us, Patrick :) Bonnee Crawfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01513268628209169538noreply@blogger.com